Targets - How to improve my essays

Targets:
1. Must use British examples and compare to Hollywood;
2. Examples from our case study should be used i.e. Working Title, and then compare them to Hollywood and Warp Films;
3. Refer back to the question, in this case the impact new technologies have on the industry;
4. Our main focus is Audience and Institution;
5. Use 'audience' as a substitute for 'you' and 'us' etc;
6. Terminology is key, so make use of the terms I know to get better marks;
7. Give detailed points, and explain them not describe. Use PEE to do so.

To get better marks on my next essay, I am going to revise these targets to help me inprove on my work.